Hallow

It's a poem whats more to say.

I am nothing now

The waves have washed away my castle.

So fragile I was, So oblivious we are.

Trapped in a whirlpool of bliss.

The crab left his home and i am whats left

an abandoned house

My door is always open, but the DEADbolt holds steady

I am screaming for them to return

but the screen is sponging my voice

The waves are eturning

they carry no drift wood with them

The crab comes crawling back

but he is too big for me now

I am stuck in this hole, I gasp for air

The sand burn my throat

and the sun bakes my skin

The night has fallen, The clouds are passing

My blood is cold, my skin aflame

I am gone to you, anyone

A empty shell, a ruined sandcastle

Please just forget me

and all that I was, Wasn't

I am hallow

Reviews

[Isericanormal]

I really liked it. It had a great view on things my blood is cold my skin aflame. Gave me chills lol.
Keep it up great job dude!

[Marie]

I'd love to have a castle. A new age castle with heat and electricity. Great write.