your wish

your wish

A Poem by RedRose1250
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yes yes its weird..whatever

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red is the blood i have spilt out of anger.

black is the tears that flow down my face.

white was the color of my soul.

Your wish was for me to be happy and free.

You should have never made that wish.

You should have left me alone.

© 2010 RedRose1250


Author's Note

RedRose1250
mind the grammer and spelling i try

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thank you i think im not feeling this way anymore...but it always changes...im bipolar...GO FIGURE!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


This poem has very strong emotions portrayed. Even though it is a short piece it gets your point across. It is great the way it is. I think there are times when many people have felt this way.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 23, 2010
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RedRose1250
RedRose1250

columbia, TN



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i'm not ur normal tomboy or girl...lets just leave it at that my love...i'm 16..and i love my boyfriend more than ever more..

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A Poem by RedRose1250


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A Poem by RedRose1250