Ice and Fire

i made this up from what i want to do with the one i love...

His hands were like ice.

Her heart was like fire.

He gentle touched her chest.

She gasped in excitement.

He holds her close to his ice cold chest.

She wimpers and bites his n****e.

He groans and pushes her to the ground.

She pulls him ontop of her.

His heart speeds and so does hers.

She kisses him with firey passion.

He enters her.

Her back arches in pleasure.

He groans and pushes in harder and further.

She felt him deep inside her.

He feels how warm and tight she is.

Her back arches more,she breaths heavily.

He held her hands above her head and pushed in and out.

She moaned and shrieked a couple of times as he did so.

HE only moved faster and harder.

Her body jerked as she released her bodyly love around him.

He groaned and kept moving never letting go of her hands.

She moaned and bite his neck as hard as she could.

He released her hands as his body jerked and he gave in.

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Author's Note

ignore my grammer and misspellings..

Reviews

[Rachel Martinez]

Very nice

[RedRose1250]

i wasnt the normal me when i did this so thank you...i actually had fun writing this when i was hiding in the bathroom sitting on the floor...lol

[Poetic Beauty]

The flow of this poem is smooth. The style is different but I like this. The picture you have painted in the this piece of writing is a steamy one and rather well written. Tastefully done.

[Luke Sentnl]

If this is all you want to do with the one you love, I can't say it's much, where is the passion! and the lust! ;D

Still a fun read.