The dreaded end...

its about thie kid who owes money bigtime

Its' night.

Your full of fright.

Your tired?

But you've lied.

You've been cursed.

There's no remorse.

You're in bigtime debt.

Now...your dead...

Reviews

[Samantha]

short, scary, and says alot. Whoever this was for/about, if i were them i would be terrified. Short but simple. I enjoyed it.

[mystic soul]

i agree with others reviewer this poem is short but it says a lot.... great!!

[FiveOrchids]

short and strong. it's brilliant!

[Coyote Poetry]

A excellent poem. You said it all in a few words. Every word had a purpose. A cold and good ending.
Coyote

[Gabriella]

"You're," not "your."

Short poems like this can say plenty with few words. That's good.