No more...

No more...

A Poem by RedRose1250
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just read and find out

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Darkness fills to the brim.

I feel so grim.

I have no hope.

I think i'll use this rope.

You say you believe.

But i'll never achieve.

My feet fall from the chair.

Everyone seems to finally care.

© 2010 RedRose1250


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So dark, yet moving. A place most people cannot even imagine. Very powerful and direct.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A sad and dark poem. We need to listen. Last line is the truth. So many tears after the person dead. Few kind words when you are alive. A powerful short poem.
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Posted 14 Years Ago


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Added on January 8, 2010
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RedRose1250
RedRose1250

columbia, TN



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i'm not ur normal tomboy or girl...lets just leave it at that my love...i'm 16..and i love my boyfriend more than ever more..

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A Poem by RedRose1250



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