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A Poem by RedRose1250
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basicly the girl is in hell

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The steel bars rattle.

My teeth chatter.

I'm stuck in this hell.

There is no bail.

My hearts beats with fear.

My eyes fill with tears.

I am struck cold.

I have no more hold.

 

© 2010 RedRose1250


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A dark and sad poem. Hard for my old eyes to read. We can create prison by sadness and disappointments. A excellent poem.
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Posted 14 Years Ago


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RedRose1250
RedRose1250

columbia, TN



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i'm not ur normal tomboy or girl...lets just leave it at that my love...i'm 16..and i love my boyfriend more than ever more..

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hers.. hers..

A Poem by RedRose1250