Going Dull

Going Dull

I try, and try but just can’t succeed

I fall, and fall but just can’t stand

I push, and push but just can’t do the deed

I wish, and wish but just can’t understand

As much as I try nothing works

As much as I fall I will always fall again

As much as I push I can’t face those jerks

As much as I wish I’m still stuck like when I was ten

The more I try the more I fail

The more I fall the weaker I get

The more I wish the further I am from the right trail

The more I push the more i’m a threat

I am all alone in this battle

I am going dull

Reviews

[Raj Sahu]

Really a sad poem! It's depressing. 😔

[Amber Kelleher]

Is that good?

[Raj Sahu]

Why not? It is absolutely amazing.

[Amber Kelleher]

Thank you!