TIME

Tick,Tock

every second

every hour goes by

I am stuck

the minutes keep

moving. The 

years keep changing 

I am stuck

I am stuck in this 

world

stuck in this world of love&hatred 

in a world full of 

stupidity&intelligence

I am stuck

As everything and everyone 

moves along with their lives

I sit there. Everything

moves in a blur and

I stand still. You move on

with your life while the time for me 

has stopped.

I am stuck

Reviews

[forgotten_ghosts]

A few years ago I felt like the persona in this great poem of yours living in a world of ambivalence, torn between extremes, stuck in time. Stuck, while everybody is changing and moving along with their lifes, leaving me alone. Awesome poem!

[Glen Yumang Manese]

A different take with the representation of "time" in this verse...yet...time is just a calculation for us...not an actual event...but I do like the way you reflect this matter in the lines...gives an angle others jsut take for granted...with what they actually do with their time...