A Genesis

An epic story about fire, struggle, resentment, letting go, forgiveness and revelation :) enjoy

A Genesis

Black wrath greets fire's maul
to create crimson skies
in the face of The Fall.
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To rise crystal cold oceans
to devour us all.

Faceless wind meets ruthless kin
to create blind fate
inside a whirlwind.

Mother earth opens
like a w***e's thighs
menstruating red hot mess,
The lava sea
flows as it ingests.

With Dark ash raining
in chaotic synchronicity's painting
The fallen angel screams
"Embrace the pain
Oh god,
in your name
just to feel you"

Thunder claps violent
as the angel's brethren grins,
  a demon from hell
is the angel's twin.

Conceived in the same womb,
yet polar opposites they bloomed.
Separate values in life
but now unite in doom.

The angel Fell
in love with a widowed wife
when in heavens grace is forbidden,
so in lust he was ridden.

The storm inhales a breathe
and quakes as she gales.

The demon's memory
has only known fancied hate.
Reaping cold hard glory
with Satan's whisper in his fate

With sin as a bribe
for his emptiness inside
and constant jealous loathing
for the grace in brother's glide.

The sky turns an injured scarlet
with rain pouring like it's bleeding.

Life times ago
In a place in between
to and fro
on a night like this..
Cain slayed Abel
but he went to hell
as his kin ascended as an angel.

Now They reunite as this,
after Cain regained entry
from his abyss,

With vengeance in his eye
and Satan's rape in his heart,
He is the reaper
with Hell on earth to impart.

After years of being departed
from his heavenly shade,
Abel still feels obliged
to stop brother's tirade.

Like an atomic epiphany
the world wakes in Death's symphony.

The long lost brothers face off
and Abel scream's
"Embrace the pain
Oh god,
in your name
just to feel you again!"

He embrace's Cain
and all of his gloom,
attaches to his being
like together again in the womb.

He feels all Cane's convictions
and cry's out in affliction,
yet he embraces Cain's pain and grudge
and his own all together,
then Releases through brother
and into forever.

"I forgive you Cain."

Breathe...

The sky starts to recover
into a healing shade of baby blue
A shade of a new born babes fabrics,
Calming and soothing and true.

The Earth closes
and bundles up in a cozy coat of green
that's embroidered with brilliant blooms,
the sun shines like smiling,
the air resonates like perfume.

Nothing else matters,
Everything is stable.
Ecstasy veils in a godlike voice:
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"I forgive you Abel." 

Author's Note

If anyone catches any grammar mistakes let me know because I suck with that stuff :D

Reviews

[Liza]

OMG! you are a young but wise old soul - as if you have existed before...very provacative write! Amazing imagery, contrast and comparison with mother earth, the heavens, hell, struggles within families and goodness and evil and everything in between - blown away

especially this part
Mother earth opens
like a w***e's thighs
menstruating red hot mess,
The lava sea
flows as it ingests.

YOU ARE SO DARING - I LOVE IT!

KEEP IT UP!!!!

[The Morbid The Merrier]

Wow. This was just...wow. I loved it. Everything about it in fact. I love the metaphors you used, I love the rhyme and the rhythm, and I love the story. There were no grammar mistakes and well written. I'm so glad you put this up, it was a fantastic read. ^^

[Georgia Gypsy]

That is an epic write! so well expressed and the story carried me all the way through.
Great job.

i didnt see any mistakes...but would tell you if i did.

thanks for sharing:)
kelli