Sent, Now Waiting

I am a fool

have been used like a tool

have lost and won duels

I try, but unknowingly

And wait, dreadfully

wait for the worst, 

wishing for anything

I wilt in my grave

Author's Note

this is short.....

Reviews

[Shaheesta]

Very impactful, really loved it.

[Crimson Apples]

Thank you!
I'm glad you did =)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Short but intense and with great impact.
I liked the feeling of dwelling in reverie while reading this song.
Beautifully penned!

[Crimson Apples]

Thank you =)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

You are welcome.

[zunie frost]

This is awsome starting lines are perfect with great rhymes
love this

[Crimson Apples]

thank you so much for your reviews!

[zunie frost]

Welcome !!:-P

[FreedomFighter]

I think if anything short is better, great work

[Crimson Apples]

Thank you =D

[FreedomFighter]

u got it!!

[Grey Evanescent]

Short but you were able to create such impact to the readers.
Love it! -and your other works!

Keep up the good word Crimson XD (is it okay if I call you that?)

[Crimson Apples]

Totally!
Thanks a lot for the review! I'm super glad to hear that =D

[Grey Evanescent]

you're welcome ^_^

[Lilaa]

Wow! An amazing piece, keep up the great work

[Crimson Apples]

Thank you =)

[Girl With A Pen]

Wow, simple, and yet almost dark. I'm not sure if this is the point you meant to get across with this poem, however what I took from it is something I have been through a few times. I have felt used by friends and family before and did not know how to handle it. Just having to wait for something to happen on it's own. A feeling of having no control of what others do with you, not for you. A waiting game that only death can end. Very powerful poem. Loved it!

[Crimson Apples]

Dang, that was deep! It was also true, and is a great point. Our interpretation of a poem has a lot to do with our own experiences, so I can see why you took it that way. Thanks for commenting, =D and sorry you've been used =(

[siddhi]

wow it quite inert i really appreciate your work
thankyou for posting

[Crimson Apples]

Your welcome!!!

[-inactive now-]

cool poem... you described that awful feeling I quite vividly remember of anxiously waiting to find out how someone you have expressed strong feelings for feels about you...
At least that is how I interpreted it.. Well done anyway.

[Crimson Apples]

Thanks! That's what happened, gawsh. I started thinking of everything else I could've done.

[Knight Writer]

good work....small..t meaningful..reminded me of many things

[Crimson Apples]

Thanks for commenting =)