Draw the Line

Draw the Line

A Poem by One Last Drop...
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Just a poem I wrote after finally seeing past my ex-boyfriend's facade

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I used to think you were so fine;

I just wanted to make you mine;

But I see past the charm now;

And I finally see how;

How, when and where to draw the line.

© 2008 One Last Drop...


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Ashleigh, welcome to the world of limerick! You got really close with this one. Close enough, in fact, that I'd like to personally invite you to the Limerick group. Consider it, yes?

Susan S

PS. check the notes

Posted 16 Years Ago



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One Last Drop...
One Last Drop...

Perth, Australia



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Hi! Here's a little bit about me... I'm almost 20, studying to be a high-school English teacher. I work as a swimming teacher whenever possible, and I write a lot of fanfiction. My favourite mus.. more..

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