False prophets

False prophets

A Poem by Melissa
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Hypocrisy that resides within churches

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False Prophets

You speak of peace, love, and faith;
Your speech gives you away!
Hypocrite, why should we listen?

You reside amid self-imposed
grandeur, but the stench of your
lies betray you.

Carrying around undeserved titles,
gloating. Spiritual feeders abusing
your powers.

You lord it over your flock,
milking them dry of their hard earned
wages; you should freely be teaching.

What?

Truth!

Yeah right, you hypocrites;
Corruption sits in your pulpit,
even though it might glisten
on the outside.

© 2008 Melissa


Author's Note

Melissa
This isn't to offend but to bring out truths that in most religions a heavy weight falls upon those in leading positions to teach, yet abuse it.

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I absolutly adored this piece! It hit's so close to home; Almost as if my mind had been read.
The leaders of religion and politics as well, all can fall into this words. They abuse, and corrupt. Taking away the essence of Goodness and Godliness from the common folk.

Great Write!
Infinity's Shadow

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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My my - strong words there! I admire you for speaking it like it is.

Posted 16 Years Ago


I totally agree with this piece. This won't offend anyone (unless they are guilty of hypocrisu hahaha)

"Being religious/ Religion doesn't mean Salvation."

:)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a poignant piece of poetry zeroing into a stark reality; I speak from experience. Sadly enough, there is much self-imposed grandeur and many who were called to lead the flock of God merely lord over them as you rightly point out! I don't think any other phraseology would make this piece any better than it already is...

~excellent~

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I absolutly adored this piece! It hit's so close to home; Almost as if my mind had been read.
The leaders of religion and politics as well, all can fall into this words. They abuse, and corrupt. Taking away the essence of Goodness and Godliness from the common folk.

Great Write!
Infinity's Shadow

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

The closing lines remind the reader of the words of Christ when He spoke of the Pharisees as being like tombs and sepulchres, all polished and shining on the outside but filled with bones, darkness and decay within.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

So true in so many of the world's religions. I think you might enjoy my song "Hypocrisy" or perhaps the poem "The Question". You point out this problem rather well I think. Kudos.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Melissa

Davison, MI



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