Mortal Guide

Emotion is natural, whether you embrace them or not.

Alike urban twilight,

unnatural natures arrive

in wake of repetition,

and intensity ignites

for the trials of one

brisk unto night’s intonation.

Two innocent souls’ ardor within,

burdened with adopted sin

from drudgery and trauma,

ensconce themselves from the socialties

of their loved and their acknowledged;

oneself viewing from the ticker,

nugatory from unseeing now,

this old ardor revives again.

Shakespearean wrath and grieving

embodies what of remains

the old shell of one.

The second, thus aforementioned,

the outsiding mind seldom

able to call.

The florid hope lightened

from the creating hands of one

whom raises not for creation

of mindedly descendance,

but that of the one breathing,

needful of outsiding care;

that hope then heightened.

The one woman bares

codices and chervils.

Her heart ever beating,

versed as a chisel.

Sight enlightened,

the unchained soul trudges on

with healed wounds…

and faithful gratitude.

Author's Note

Some of the words in the poem ('outsiding", for instance) I made up myself to fit with the tone I'm trying to go for. Some of the others are actual words you'd find in a dictionary. Just letting you know.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

A love others might see as despicable or taboo can cause a wedge between families and family members.
Ah, Romeo and Juliet and others...dealing with such ridiculous hates when love should conquer.
This is quite a write, including the made up words.
I used to do that in my Eng. 101 essays and my teacher loved it.
It was either creative genius or creative crazy on my part.
j.

[Keagen Cole]

I really like your insight on it. I actually got inspired to do it after a rather... emotional moment with my brother and stepmom; I was the "one soul", my brother was the second, and my stepmom was "the woman".
I again thank you for your review. ☺

[coagulatedfire]

Yea Keagen, I thought reading that, wow, I never heard that word! Oh, theres another, huh, I think he is writing from Shakespeare perhaps? Wow, this person has a big vocab. Haha, nice work. I really like the plank you stepped out onto.

[Keagen Cole]

Thanks, @coagulatedfire. I usually do it because it lightens my mood.

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

Hellos, Dear Keagan Cole, marked words,
enjoyed it very much,
The Shakespearean words of quarrels and quamms,
the Innocence in Twilight, and dangers that are monootonouse,
very strong, in words,
the capture of tumbling with your woman,
so ever ending of satisfast, great write!
----1809 Black Plague December