Full moon

Ok featured on Jades page. This is the poem i wrote from her writing the influence of the moon.

The glistening moonlight shimmers in your eyes,

the night we stood beneath the starry skies.

The moment the cold disappeared,

leaving only you near.

 

There is so much I want to ask here, now,

but i struggle to find the words how.

How do you feel when i kiss you?

Do you feel the way i do?

Would you remember me when you're gone?

 

The full moon filling this starry night,

This i know is right.

The sweet elixir of a kiss we share,

as you run your hand gently through my hair,

keeping me safe;keeping me there.

 

Part of me cries,

dies,

when i don't see you.

 

The glistening moonlight shimmers in your eyes,

the night we stood beneath the starry skies.

The moment the cold disappeared,

leaving only you holding me near.

 

I love you but iwll you remember?

this moment i will treasure forever.

Will we remain as "we",

or will it one day just be "me"?

 

Oh how i love you.

Please,

Tell me how oyu feel, is this real?

 

The glistening moonlight shimmers in your eyes,

the night we stood beneath the starry skies.

The moment the cold disappeared,

leaving only you holding me near.

You complete my night.

Author's Note

As i said from the influence of the moon by Jade. for her and her bf x

Reviews

[Scarlet Letter]

I love this poem. It makes me think of someone who has not been in love for very long and is unsure of their partner's feelings towards them. I was there once, feeling this overwhelming love within myself, yet not fully knowing if he cared as much as I did. But now I have no doubts that he loves me as much as I love him. Such a sweet poem.

[Schnookums]

Our writing flows like the beautiful sun across the sky from morning to evening. I love reading it :D

[3OH!3]

fantastic!