Venom

Poetry

You want to criticize, open your mouth and spit your lies?
I guess you don't think I'm very wise?
That only innocence lays behind my eyes.
Take your words, your hate don't hesitate.
But don'twait for me to agree.
I'm stronger than you'll ever know, and I'll let you go.
I'll bleed but the bleeding will slow.
You'll be amazed at how much I know.

Reviews

[Jesse]

Again you pour you feelings into the poem. Life is such a gift to be wasted on hate but there is something about....to the degree one hates, one loved. Awesome Poem.

[nazia]

What i personally think is criticism actually makes you stronger and wiser...
nice write :)