Him

My first piece of writing! It's a poem about seeing a guy and having a "crush" on him but not having the courage to say hello.

I see him walk,

I see him talk,

I see him smile,

I do believe he is definitely worth my while,

I saw him walking down the aisle,

I longed to say hi,

But I didn't have the courage,

Now I'll never know,

If we could ever be,

Author's Note

This is my first poem(:

Reviews

[Adam :P]

good job espcially for a first poem, i like it, its sad. happens alot to. good write.

[cfix]

This is wonderful and so lovely!

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~this is a beautiful poem~

:)

[GTVile]

Good job. When you say "isle" do you mean a body of land surrounded on all sides by water? Or do you mean "aisle" as in a grocery store? That through me through a loop a bit, but perhaps you live in Hawaii or something =) Anyhoo, good job.

[FallenHeroXx]

Sounds Good :) i like it :)

[darkgurl]

This is wonderful. Very well written.

[Matt Shutler]

This was a good first poem. It had meaning and feeling behind it, and being honest is one of the hardest things to do, so good job.

[John Stussy]

Adorable poem, sometimes that attraction stuns us to inactivity and chances pass us up. Always somewhat frustrating when that happens, but other opportunities arise.

[sammyj]

I really like this piece keep going

[melissa]

sweet. a very good first poem(: