To sing of such magic! This was wonderful. Romance at its finest. After reading this, one couldn't deny the twinge in their heart nor fight the awe shining in their eyes. It make one hopeful for a love like this to brighten their dreary days and pick them up when they're at their lowest. I'm a romantic at heart, so this definitely spoke to me. Great read.
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
SUCH a heartfelt review!!!! Thank you SOOOO very much!!!! As you probably are aware, I too am a ro.. read moreSUCH a heartfelt review!!!! Thank you SOOOO very much!!!! As you probably are aware, I too am a romantic at heart!!! What would life BE if it weren't for romance? Boring!!! Thank you again, from the bottom of my heart straight to yours!!!
OH btw.... u prob. guessed this already (or somewhere close hee hee).. I wrote this to the man of my.. read moreOH btw.... u prob. guessed this already (or somewhere close hee hee).. I wrote this to the man of my dreams (and into reality!)... After 46 years of kissing the few frongs I have... I finally found my true prince! Crazy how life can turn around in a heart beat! The guy i was supposed to marry over 2 years ago shattered my heart in ways a person would never want to dream of (put it this way... the 18 year old apparently was more exciting for him :P !). Had it NOT been for him having this affair for over 6 months... I may of never had a chance to get close to my friend then.. and now my Prince... so... this poem is about my ONE true and hopeless love for him!!!
6 Years Ago
Aww, what a touching story with a fairy tale ending. Many of us only dream of being so fortunate to .. read moreAww, what a touching story with a fairy tale ending. Many of us only dream of being so fortunate to find our one and only. Again, this was a very fond piece. Very warm :-)
6 Years Ago
Awww thank you.. so sorry I'm so late at reading your review!!! You're such a sweetheart!
To sing of such magic! This was wonderful. Romance at its finest. After reading this, one couldn't deny the twinge in their heart nor fight the awe shining in their eyes. It make one hopeful for a love like this to brighten their dreary days and pick them up when they're at their lowest. I'm a romantic at heart, so this definitely spoke to me. Great read.
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
SUCH a heartfelt review!!!! Thank you SOOOO very much!!!! As you probably are aware, I too am a ro.. read moreSUCH a heartfelt review!!!! Thank you SOOOO very much!!!! As you probably are aware, I too am a romantic at heart!!! What would life BE if it weren't for romance? Boring!!! Thank you again, from the bottom of my heart straight to yours!!!
OH btw.... u prob. guessed this already (or somewhere close hee hee).. I wrote this to the man of my.. read moreOH btw.... u prob. guessed this already (or somewhere close hee hee).. I wrote this to the man of my dreams (and into reality!)... After 46 years of kissing the few frongs I have... I finally found my true prince! Crazy how life can turn around in a heart beat! The guy i was supposed to marry over 2 years ago shattered my heart in ways a person would never want to dream of (put it this way... the 18 year old apparently was more exciting for him :P !). Had it NOT been for him having this affair for over 6 months... I may of never had a chance to get close to my friend then.. and now my Prince... so... this poem is about my ONE true and hopeless love for him!!!
6 Years Ago
Aww, what a touching story with a fairy tale ending. Many of us only dream of being so fortunate to .. read moreAww, what a touching story with a fairy tale ending. Many of us only dream of being so fortunate to find our one and only. Again, this was a very fond piece. Very warm :-)
6 Years Ago
Awww thank you.. so sorry I'm so late at reading your review!!! You're such a sweetheart!
Wonderful and good words shared Rebecca.
"Upon a pedestal,
Up in the sky,
Up and away,"
I love the above lines. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Coyote... I have to say this... I have TRULY enjoyed reading your BEAUTIFUL reviews you gave me!!! .. read moreCoyote... I have to say this... I have TRULY enjoyed reading your BEAUTIFUL reviews you gave me!!! I was away for a few days due to an emergency in my family... but I am back, and WOW am I glad!!! You have a true heart!!! Thanx again for making my YEAR!!! I'm on my way to your page (in between a movie, fixing up chapter 4 in the 'book' i have posted on here and checking out my new reviews). I hope you are enjoying your week!
Oh-MY, Dear Rebecca!
How wonderful to know you DO write poems, too, and what a sweetly luring love poem it is to touch the depths of my heart with … you included, emotion, affection, hopes, dreams, feelings, promise, etc; and, entwined it all with lovely ribbons of Nature flowing all thorough.
This is sheer poetic harmony from a woman knows what true love looks and feels like, and you swept me right up into your heart.
Beautiful, Rebecca, and the only hint of helpful critique I might offer is to single space your lines in each verse … other than that, I gift you five golden stars! 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
OH what a wonderful thing to sign on here to see!!! Thank you SO much! I am honored that you enjoy.. read moreOH what a wonderful thing to sign on here to see!!! Thank you SO much! I am honored that you enjoyed this :) I will check out the spacing for sure!! I do know since I copied and pasted them from my Facebook notes to here, there is prob. some issues with spacing, etc. I did notice one of my poems I posted didn't have a space between each verse.
6 Years Ago
Yes, Rebecca,
This site seems to coordinate best with Microsoft Word formatting, but I am sur.. read moreYes, Rebecca,
This site seems to coordinate best with Microsoft Word formatting, but I am sure you will figure it out, as browsed one of your poems that had great spacing and verse separations. In fact, I plan to review it next. ; )
6 Years Ago
Awesome to know!!! I will for sure fix them all up on word and re-paste them!!!! Thank you!!!!
My Story/Poetry Blog (please feel free to visit, read and comment! It's a more updated version of my work here :) )
https://imaginingsasimsstory.blogspot.com/
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