Forgive Me

Forgive Me

You want to walk in here

Walk right here into these closed doors

But there is not a hope

Of you ever getting through them

You wouldn’t even try

If you could see the me behind there

I am shaking I am trembling

My heart is pounding

And I feel this way because

I’ve been hurt too many times

Put through pain I cannot stand

It breaks my heart

And burns me all over

Can’t run back to there again

You’re moving straight towards me

Moving like a speeding bullet

But the is not a hope

Of breaking the glass that shields me

You wouldn’t even try

If you could see the me behind there

I am shaking

I am trembling

My heart is pounding

And I feel this way because

I’ve been hurt too many times

Put through pain I cannot stand

It breaks my heart

And burns me all over

Can’t run back to there again

You’re looking into my eyes

Staring face to face right at me

But there is not a hope

Of me staying right next to you

I’ve got to get away

Because you’ve seen the me behind them

I am shaking

I am trembling

My heart is pounding

And I feel this way because

I’ve been hurt too many times

Put through pain I cannot stand

It breaks my heart

And burns me all over

Can’t run back to there again

Please forgive me

Please forgive me

Can’t come out of here right now

Please forgive me

I might see you some time later

Please forgive me

Reviews

[Serendipity Planet]

Powerful , you expressed your emotions in a beautiful way

[Great Aunt Astri]

Yes, but sometimes a poem is more effective if you don't say exactly what you mean. Perhaps a few outside references? Perhaps a simile or two to enhance your emotions? But, perhaps not. Your poem does read well, and it does express what you are saying.

[mila]

This is so heartbreaking and beautiful. I can relate to this a lot, love it

[Bec]

Thank You Very Much