You to Me and Me to You

You to Me and Me to You

A Poem by Rebecca Raine
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First poem on here. I hope you all like it.

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To me you are the morning glory, 
shining softly upon my face.
To me you are the loving arms,
I yearn to feel their embrace.
To you I am the lingering shadows,
creeping secretly into your heart.
To you I am the binding shackles,
nothing can break them apart.
To me you are a captivating beauty,
gracing me with a petty glance.
To me you have an air of love,
putting me in an admiring trance.
To you I am winters air,
covering you like a bitter cold cape.
To you I am a vast abyss,
forever searching for an escape.

© 2010 Rebecca Raine


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The poem is amazing. Very hard to see yourself and look at other with true vision. I like the kind emotions in this poem. So many strong lines making this a powerful poem. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
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Posted 14 Years Ago


This is a neat poem in the sense that you explore 'Me' and 'You,' and you contrast them so beautifully. I love the contrast of the warmth from the "To me you are," whilst the "To you I am," have a coldness. It's interesting to read. :]

Posted 14 Years Ago


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hmm
To you I am the lingering shadows,
creeping secretly into your heart.

enjoyable lines here. This is one emotional filled write.

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Rebecca Raine
Rebecca Raine

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Hi. I'm Rebecca. Generally I don't take the time to make things like this. Generally I don't take the time to do much of anything. I'm pretty busy all the time and it's rare if I get pen to paper. How.. more..

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