You to Me and Me to You

First poem on here. I hope you all like it.

To me you are the morning glory, 

shining softly upon my face.

To me you are the loving arms,

I yearn to feel their embrace.

To you I am the lingering shadows,

creeping secretly into your heart.

To you I am the binding shackles,

nothing can break them apart.

To me you are a captivating beauty,

gracing me with a petty glance.

To me you have an air of love,

putting me in an admiring trance.

To you I am winters air,

covering you like a bitter cold cape.

To you I am a vast abyss,

forever searching for an escape.

Reviews

[Just Plain Me]

I love the differences in the points of view (was gonna say the contrast...but everyone else already did :P ) This is really good, and I think everyone can relate to it to an extent...good job

[Cassiopia Summers]

Great contrast between each stanza! this is indeed a fascinating poem. One to which I can relate, which makes it even better. :)

[Kasey Jones]

I love the pattern, and the contrast. great poem! So many good metaphors.

[HorrorMaster]

very good poem

[Brianna Brie]

Your creativity shows. Very nicely written! I like the physical images you create in our mind to drive home the meaning.

[Andrew-H]

I liked how with the "to me's" it was positive thoughts, and the "to you's" it was negative. I feel that it could be expanded on though, like it's almost incomplete. I did however like it.

[Marie Harrison]

I really like this poem. I love the flow and the message.

[angel gone bad]

i think that this is good

[Wolfe Greytome]

I like this piece a lot, but then again, I usually do like structured verse. This is extremely well written. Your contrasting viewpoints balance each other very well in a never-ending struggle for harmony without the need for supremacy. If this is your first piece on here, I look forward to seeing others.

[Dreamer<3]

This is absolutely amazing!