Eternal

Eternal

A Poem by Beck Louise
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Definitely not great but hey, least I tried

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Fading fast
I need your light
wake me up
deep in the night

Place a kiss
soft and sweet
leaving love
upon my cheek

Feel my heart
beat against your own
Close we lay
each others home

I walk now
keeping nerves at bay
our love made eternal
we marry today

© 2012 Beck Louise


Author's Note

Beck Louise
As usual, ignore grammar/spelling

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Aw, the last line made me smile so hugely.

I loved it. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very sweet! Love it. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


ADORABLE! I love the flow with the rhythm and rhyme. Oh it was absolutely lovely! I'm a sucker for romance stuff too, which only makes me love it more. Very nice write truly! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Aw this was sweet! Love it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


awwwwwwwwww i love that poem! it is so sweet! I always love reading happy love poems :) it is very well written

Posted 12 Years Ago


Beck Louise

12 Years Ago

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)

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Added on July 4, 2012
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Beck Louise
Beck Louise

United Kingdom



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I'm Beck. I'm a writer focusing on women's fictions, drama, and historical romance. I am active on this platform again as of March 2023, so please send any read requests and I will make sure I ge.. more..

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