Eternal
A Poem by
Beck Louise
Definitely not great but hey, least I tried
Fading fast
I need your light
wake me up
deep in the night
Place a kiss
soft and sweet
leaving love
upon my cheek
Feel my heart
beat against your own
Close we lay
each others home
I walk now
keeping nerves at bay
our love made eternal
we marry today
© 2012 Beck Louise
Author's Note
As usual, ignore grammar/spelling
Reviews
Aw, the last line made me smile so hugely.
I loved it. :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
Very sweet! Love it. :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
Very sweet! Love it. :)
ADORABLE! I love the flow with the rhythm and rhyme. Oh it was absolutely lovely! I'm a sucker for romance stuff too, which only makes me love it more. Very nice write truly! :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
ADORABLE! I love the flow with the rhythm and rhyme. Oh it was absolutely lovely! I'm a sucker for romance stuff too, which only makes me love it more. Very nice write truly! :)
Aw this was sweet! Love it!
Posted 12 Years Ago
Aw this was sweet! Love it!
awwwwwwwwww i love that poem! it is so sweet! I always love reading happy love poems :) it is very well written
Posted 12 Years Ago
awwwwwwwwww i love that poem! it is so sweet! I always love reading happy love poems :) it is very well written
12 Years Ago
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)
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Added on July 4, 2012
Last Updated on July 4, 2012
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poetry romance love
Author
Beck Louise United Kingdom
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I'm Beck. I'm a writer focusing on women's fictions, drama, and historical romance.
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