Friendship is a warzone

A poem I wrote a while back. Don't really write them anymore. This one is pretty s**t though.

Feelings of inadequacy fill my mind

my sorrow spirals into self pity

I take a breath and look behind

at the ruined remains of this city

How can you be so cold to me?

and sell me out to save yourself

How can you be so blind and not see

I gave you nothing but endless help

Your friendship isn't worth the pain

You'll never break me down again

I swore you'd never wear me out

and promised I would never doubt

myself the way I did before

but now you're gone I breath once more

You pushed me out like I was dirt

but now you'll be the one to hurt.

You always denied me honesty

Poster child for selfishness 

You choke on your apology

because it's meaningless.

You've screwed me over once again

but this time is the f*****g last

I swear this time you won't soil my name

or dig up the dirty sins of my past.

I'll win this time if it kills me

and I swear you won't see me cry

I'm done being who you want to see

Now we say our final goodbye. 

Reviews

[BillyGirl]

This isn't s**t! This was great :D I loved it, because I really felt it. The words brought it to life.

[Beck Louise]

Thank you! :) that means a lot

[Emrys Realmskip]

Woahh! Loved it! very Good rhyming! :) All the way through it kept my attention! Bravo
Savvy

[Beck Louise]

aw thank god then! :) thanks a lot!!

[Emrys Realmskip]

Your welcome! :)

[Owlgirl]

This is amazing! I loved it! From the title all the way through the last word! Great job, very well written!

[Beck Louise]

Thank you so much :)

[quixotic_rose]

I enjoyed this!! it is NOT s**t, you just say that because your confidence in it is lacking a bit. Just know its got a lot of potential and could easily be an astronomical write. I agree with xXemoeeyoreXx that it could be turned into a song with a couple of switches and a chorus. seriously, its good :)

[Beck Louise]

Thank you! I was quite nervous about this one so I'm glad it's not as bad as I thought :)

[That_Girl]

This isn't s**t. I really enjoyed it. I think if a few things were switched around and a strong chorus was added in, it could quite possibly be turned into a song. Good job!

[Beck Louise]

Thank you! I will work on it a bit more and see if I can do that :)