All that I am

All that I am

A Poem by Beck Louise
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I haven't written any poetry in a while...you can tell

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I'm a leaf,
with fall two weeks away

I'm the sky
sometimes blue, sometimes grey

I'm the rain
drenching us from above

I'm everyone
who's ever fallen in love

I'm the sun
shining over all you do

I'm the blade
cutting these scars into you

I'm the desparation 
in your voice asking me to stay

but I am myself
and now I must walk away

© 2012 Beck Louise


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Wow very powerful and meaningful poem. I really.liked it

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Wonderful ending! Painful but lovable! 100/100 Amazing work! :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


Like the ending. Powerful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love the transitions. Smooth. So glad you're back!

*desperation

*But - the rest are capitalized. I know they are all I or I'm but... Eh. Personal preference maybe. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on October 4, 2012
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Beck Louise
Beck Louise

United Kingdom



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I'm Beck. I'm a writer focusing on women's fictions, drama, and historical romance. I am active on this platform again as of March 2023, so please send any read requests and I will make sure I ge.. more..

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