F**k You

I refuse to be belittled 

While you plead your innocent part 

crumbling to ashes from your words

They've cut me too deep not to scar

how can you be blind to the pain

you've been causing me for so long?

you've been the reason for my demise

I blamed myself for all you did wrong

I refuse to let you win this time

I will not throw away my morals too

to win your sick and childish games

I'll keep strong and rise above you.

Reviews

[sivan]

f**k you..
I blamed myself for all you did wrong...

glad you finally realised... this is a strong piece filled with raw anger

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

You came out strong with this. I imagine you'd written this while you were mad. Anyway, awesome piece.

[Ahmad Cox]

Very heartfelt and honest. I am glad you could rise above the situation

[dunnia]

very inspiring

[captain]

go and rise from your pain. your a strong person.

[afra]

great write very powerful

[sierrasparks91]

i can relate to this very well done keep up the work.

[Cerise]

Wooow..well done..the pain is nicely described..optimism flows over all...the strength at the end of poem is wondrful..:D..great work

[quarintine_deathangel]

It's a little bit wordy but it's all your style. Nice job! It has a very clear point and the words are enough to pack a punch without being too eccentric. Thanx for writing ^.^

[Crazy Cat Man]

we waste our love on people who don't deserve our love. we like to believe that people we love share the same feelings or at least admit they dont care. but some people are just callous. its a brutal dark world. people just don't care about the feelings of others.

great piece