Daydream away

Something I wrote in English today haha. This is pretty much how I feel towards someone just now. Be honest in your reviews

I implore you to step into impossibility

to freeze all time

bottle your bravery 

I ask, would you swim the cold Atlantic 

To just hold me

like I would you

Could you ever just forget the distance

between bodies and age

and just see me

To you, I could give my whole self

If I thought for a second

you might return the favor

I wonder, do you think it even possible

that one day

you could take my hand

and we could say, forever

and stay forever,

together. 

Reviews

[sierrasparks91]

this is very pretty good job

[quarintine_deathangel]

Sounds like english is a favorite class XDD It's very soft and cute. And having a crush on someone who isn't your age, totally been there XD Nice job! ^.

[Beck Louise]

Haha oh yes! thank you:) yeah it's a tough situation :/ haha thanks again!

[.]

Truly soul touching this will always lay in my heart! 100/100 :D Great poetry!

[Beck Louise]

thank you, that really does mean the world :)

[.]

you're welcome! :D

[Theresa]

I like this. "to you I could give my whole self......one day you could take my hand" It has beauty and an elegance to it.

[Beck Louise]

Thanks, that means a lot :)

[.]

"Could you ever just forget the distance between bodies and age
and just see me" Beautifully done, Rebbie

[Beck Louise]

Thank you, appreciate it! :)

[K-mo]

aww this is so sweet!

[Beck Louise]

Thank you :)

[K-mo]

Yeah no problem:)

[That_Girl]

"I ask, would swim the cold Atlantic" Would YOU swim... possibly?

Anyways, great poem! Easily relatable and well penned. Nice!

[Beck Louise]

Thanks haha, corrected that right away! thank you :)

[That_Girl]

Anytime. :)