Complicated

I'm scared to love you

The complication pulls me in

Long nights, thinking of you

I'll never let my heart win

The more I tell myself

He's no more than a friend

The more i find myself

Knowing I cannot pretend 

I can't escape his smile

his words seep into my skin

I want to lay awhile 

just me and him

You're cautious to fall

inncase you hit rock bottom

But I'll be your wall

saving you from being forgotten

We will stand together

strong and as one

united forever 

Until our days are done

To die by your side

would be a beautiful way

you will be my pride

until my final day

Author's Note

I kind of threw these verses together, so I'm not sure about them yet.

Reviews

[Rob Santana]

haha,well I like it very much. Nicely done,love can be bueatiful. (not always)......that's on a personal note.

[Antonio Valentino]

You're cautious to fall
inncase you hit rock bottom
But I'll be your wall
saving you from being forgotten

ouch! that verse hit me in the chest hard..

fears... you gotta love them right..

this was great :)

[Ian H Morrison]

you threw it together you make me sick it would take me hours to write this well done you

[Beck Louise]

Haha, thank you, appreciate it :)

[Ian H Morrison]

i sent you a message did you get it ? ( oooppps just thought how that sounded sorry it is not sleezy or anything like that lol)

[Persephone]

I enjoyed this poem - very strong beginning and the title pulled me in - love is so like this - thanks for sharing :)

[Beck Louise]

Thank you for reading it :)

[Jordan A. Wilson]

nice flow. though it may not have been, the transfer of feeling to poetry came across as effortless. nice job.

[Beck Louise]

Thanks a lot :)

[Theresa]

I like the flow and the rhyme. I love the last stanza. I got a little confused on the 4th stanza with the 'you're cautious' i'll be your wall' It seemed one person to be narrating this then that part confused me. good piece!

[Beck Louise]

Yeah it needs a fair bit of editing ha, thanks :)

[quarintine_deathangel]

They fit together pretty well, if you want to make it more dramatic try putting some bigger words in or more eccentric language. or chronologize the verses so it seems you fall further into thought. It's good though.

[Crazy Cat Man]

i love it cute piece. u will be a wonderful gf. to whoever this man is :D

[Beck Louise]

Aww thanks :) i dont think it will work out like that though:/ thanks for the review man!:)

[Crazy Cat Man]

im sure it will ;)

[That_Girl]

This is wonderful!! I can really relate and I'm sure many other people will as well. The last stanza is beautiful! Well done!

[Beck Louise]

Thank you :) Yeah, I hope so, but in a way I don't haha. Thank you! :)

[That_Girl]

It's always nice when someone went through the same thing as you did and can truly appreciate your words... whether the situation was positive or not. :) Anytime.

[Beck Louise]

Yeah that's true :)