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This is just a beginning of something. I just want to see if it catches anyone's interest, so I can decide whether to continue it.

Where am I? Everything's a blur. I feel the grains of sand pushing into my skin, scratching softly against me. A beach? If it is I don't hear any water, but where else could it be? Rubbing my eyes I try to clarify my vision. As I look around, the scenery is unrecognizable. A sudden fear hits me as a million possibilities explode into my mind, each as horrifying as the next. I scramble to my feet in a panic, feeling pain in my body from the strain. I search around for any sign, a clue to where I am, but all I see in sand upon sand, for as far into the distance as my vision would stretch. I begin to walk in the direction of the sun, seeing this as the best option, not knowing entirely where I'm trying to get to. 

I stop after what seems like forever, finding my path blocked. What is this?  A wall of glass, seemingly endless, reaches far into the sky. I look up, seeing no end to this transparent enclosure. Fear encompasses me, taking over my confusion. I have no food or water and I was trapped in somewhere I can only assume is a vast desert. The sun is bearing down, hot and angry, but all I can do is stare up to the sky, hopeless. I jump, hearing footsteps behind me out of the deadly silence. I can't turn around quick enough, and someone grabs me. I feel strong hands lifting me away. Whoever it is has covered my face, so I can only see flashes of light pass me by. I scream out in fear. Fear of an unknown destination, an unknown kidnapper, unknown fate. I feel a jolt and then I smash to the ground. 

Reviews

[quarintine_deathangel]

That, was epic! It sounds like a beginning to a fan fiction off gotoquiz XDD I love reading those because amateur writers don't go any direction that's expected or cliche and it's truly interesting an adventure to read. I enjoyed reading, you've totally caught my interest, thanx for writing ^.~ I hope to see more!

[That_Girl]

Hmmm interesting... leaves me wondering what will happen next. The suspense is perfect... keep this going. :)

[Theresa]

I love the suspense. Could be a good start to a novel. Good luck!

[Olivia Marie]

This makes me what to read more :) Great :)

[Owlgirl]

I think you should go on with it, it's great! The suspense is wonderful, I need to know more! :)