Bittersweet

There you are my unfinished business

haunting my dreams

becoming my fears

There you are my bittersweet love

Holding my hand

breaking my heart

There I am your unfinished business

biting my tongue

biding my time

There I am your bittersweet love

giving you strength

making you weak

There is our love, our unfinished business

Making us happy

teasing our tears

There is our love, so bittersweet

We're so in love

it tears us apart

Author's Note

Ignore spelling/grammar

Reviews

[writingurl14]

wow this is a great piece of writing! keep it up!

[Lunny]

I really enjoyed this! It could be a song as well. :)

[Beck Louise]

Thank you :)

[Dr. Wood ?]

this is very good......It touches inside with it's perfect simplicity

[VeiledAngel]

This is wonderful, and thought provoking!

[Sami Khalil]

I love the last lines . Good job.

[eighwoeifj]

I love how the word 'bittersweet' is perfect for the meaning of the poem. The word is a contradiction, and the poem is listing the contradictions of love. Very nice.

[quarintine_deathangel]

A case senario seen repeated waay too many times. The way it's described in this poem is direct and clear, however, you manage to twist the dream into reality. Nice write! thanx for writing! ^.^

[quixotic_rose]

This is beautiful. A show of excellence you just always seem to have :) I've felt this way at times and you just capture the words so nicely. great job :D

[That_Girl]

Ooooo I love this! The style is fantastic! Great job!!

[Skye]

This is lovely, I love it!