The song with no name

Getting lyrical these days.

im fading

im falling down

do you see me now?

Can you fix me now?

Can you fix me?

We said always but

you pushed me aside

and spat on my ruins

F**k you and your pride

It won't be me that loses

not this time

im fading

im falling down

do you see me now?

Can you fix me now?

Can you fix me?

Your delusional and fake

worshipping yourself 

Give me a f*****g break

You have a fast track to hell

You won't take me down as well

not this time

im fading

im falling down

do you see me now?

Can you fix me now?

Can you fix me?

Fading, im falling, do you see me?

Fading, you're passing, I won't see you 

no more, No more

im fading

im falling down

do you see me now?

Can you fix me now?

Can you fix me?

Reviews

[writingurl14]

this is a beautiful song... I love it! great job! it sounds like this is something that happened to you not something that you dreamed up... it is beautiful... I can feel your pain

[Gothic Girl]

sounds like an experience. it just makes the poem more special. good one! :)

[Owlgirl]

Great song, it's beautiful. :)

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

This does sound like an excellent song.
Outstanding job! :D




Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[Lunny]

it sounds like a song and it'd be a good song :)

[quixotic_rose]

just like allllll the others, i agree the song sound punk-rockish. liked it, loved i. I destroyed it with my eyes it was just that good :). absolutely awesome !

[That_Girl]

Ooooooh I like this!!! Not sure if you want me to mention the grammar/capitalization errors......? Anyways, love it!!!!

[quarintine_deathangel]

XD totally agree BillyGirl this really reminds me of something in Blaqk Audio lyrics or the legendary punk rock genre. It sounds like an actual song and the flow is made very significant. You did a great write with this. I enjoyed reading ^.^

[BillyGirl]

Sounds like a punk-rock song to me :) This was very good!

[Beck Louise]

YES! That's my style haha :') glad someone could notice the style :) thank you!

[BillyGirl]

Lol, no worries ;D