Don't let people in

If you don't let people in

they can't hurt you

If they don't know you

They can't judge you

If you don't let them in

they can't break you

but if they hold no power

they can't hold you

If they don't judge you

they can't appreciate you

if you don't let people in

they can't love you.

Reviews

[Whiskurz]

Beautifully written and perfectly turned.......Whisk

[Theresa]

so true. I like the pattern with this.

[_mal]

This is perfect, I love how it switched

[BillyGirl]

All so true. This poem has a good low too. Great work. Keep it up!

[Owlgirl]

Interesting writing, great job! It was very well written with a smooth flow. Food for thought and easily relatable, it's a great counter to my poem "The Black Widow Spider". Awesome job!