I won't miss you

I think my poetry is getting worse haha

"I won't miss you" I swear,

looking at this utter mess

I find my feet once more

walking away from this final failed test

My cheeks become wetter

but I can't let you see

suddenly finding i'm better 

than what you made me out to be

I stand with my pride

my voice coming back

I won't run and hide

but I'm not coming back. 

Reviews

[writingurl14]

I can totally relate to this poem. it is short and sweet and to the point. it was amazing! defiantly the kind of poem many people will love! I enjoyed reading it and hope to read some more of your work soon :) keep writing

[BillyGirl]

I think your poetry is getting better, actually. This was very well written. I loved it :)

[quixotic_rose]

Pft, this is great, I agree that there is definitely a play of great inner strength here and the ability to let go and walk away. A lot of people have a hard time doing that in general. great work :)

[That_Girl]

Nahhh this is good. I like the inner strength portrayed. Great job. :)

[Owlgirl]

Hey, it's a good poem :) well done, and well written.