Derail Yourself

 GOD FORBID
           The day that you Die
           and you escape.
           Escape from this mess
           Of life
           Of nothingness
                       The day that you fly
                       Out of this Humanifest
                       That has Manifested
                       In the proximity of our minds
                       For way too long
                             
                                    THE WORLD FORGAVE
                                    All your sins
                                    And casted your skin into The earth
                                    Even though your cursed to rot on this off wordly place
                                    We will never forget you
                  You may have lost your life defending us
                  And you may fade into that ever distant memory
                  That people stumble to remember
                  There will be those with respect
                  That will be there to remind others
                     
       THE WORLD GAVE
       Food to the fallen
       So that they may starve
       Another day
       It gave us something to praise
                       BUT!
Look where this has gotten us
Today we stand on a crisis
Almost inescapable
This crisis what is it?
Ill tell you, what the problem is
its simple
HUMANITY!
thats right  
        YOU 
              AND
                    ME
The world gives us so much
but what do we do
Replant its trees?
BULLSHIT!
We cut down more than we give
we burn the forests, for what? For Money!

 GIVE ME A BREAK!!!
 You say to me Save the Earth, Does that mean
 If I were to pull a gun on your head
 And pull the trigger
 Would you say
 "Just one more for the world"
 NO We have become corrupt
                         Money is life
                         Whos to blame
                         US!
                         Not the world
                         Humans!
       Your hear to do your Job
       And im hear to end your life
       So do us a favour
       Next time you knock on my door
       Bring with you a gun and a smile
       
      Derail yourself
      Save the earth?
      SIMPLE
      WE MUST
   ERASE
                                    THE
                          HUMAN
                      RACE!
The Earth will recover without us.                                                   

Reviews

[the 13th floor]

really nice poem you have written! I thought it was interesting and well put together. Thank you too for the comment you left on my poem as well....Thanks again...the 13th floor

[Early November]

The way you presented it pulled my attention. And yes, it was very powerful. Beautifully disturbing and interesting.

[ebur™]

wow. o_O awestruck. Let's see... words to describe it.... amazing, interesting, POWERFUL, demanding. I also loved the way you wrote the poem. It has a strong message and interesting and thoughtful one at that. It makes you really think about ourselves. Nice piece.