What if?

What if?

A Poem by Rayin

 What If?
           God and the World
                                 Bible
Are just a set up for one ginormous Sketch
   That someone has drawn on paper
     And we are living out our lives in someones imagination
        On fine strands of wire
        That connect to every other wire in the masters cord room
    Destiny?
    Fate?

                                 None of that is real 
                                   The choices you make have already been mapped out
    And it is inevitable 
                                 When that serrated knife
      Or that pair of scissors
    Is held over your precious little wire
                                 You can do nothing, but play your now destined path

So whats our lives worth?
Yours...
Mine...
Wars, Death, Life, Terror, Heroism, Terrorism. Love, Hate, Friendship, Emotions, Cowardice, Loneliness, Emptyness, Value, Reflection, Harmony, Confidence, Survival instincts, Ambition, Awareness, Enthusiasm, Trust, Self-Discovery, Amusement, Feelings, Friendship, Morals, Evils, Genuine, Fear, Illness, Cures

   Everything, from the green grass blade that smoothly rub against your ankles
       To the pearl blue sky, clear of clouds that hangs above you head
                                  
   Are part of a script
   A never ending, A infinite script
      Never to be closed until the end of the World
                              We will all Manifest, one day...someday
                           Evolve, become better, Stronger, 
But dont leave me behind
                      Because while you take those steps forward
                       My wire will be left there to grow cobwebs
                           And then severed, removed
                            Then left to rot in the bottom of the pit,
                                Away from salvation
                                  A afterlife, of black floor and white sky
 And a neverending horizon where the shades merge.
                       But dont worry
                          No salvation I may be here for a while
                        But Its better I stay here than you taking my place
                          Just let me fade
                          Become a ever distant memory that do not even breach
the                            very vacinity of your brain
       Let    my             words
                       Fade
away





                         into
                        Nothing                

But dont feel resentful you cant do anything anyway
and while I lay broken in this sea of neverending Black and White
All my strings are detached I am no longer the masters puppet
And while you all walk around in the first floor of this three level hotel
Your wires and strings attached to every cell and molecule,
every muscle and every bone                  
Tendon and organs.
I Lie in the basements basement, broken 

but

Free

Free but alone

So choose now

Freedom brings Loneliness

But

normal Life Brings Control


    
                   What If?
                         Your soul wasnt inside your body
                      And your body really wasnt a empty vessel
                          You hold the key to unlock damnnation upon this humanifest
                         or holy salvation
                                Immortality but every day is the same repeated
                         Every year rolls out the same, people come and go
             Death lingers around you, upon you, inside your body 
             where your organs regenerate from the old and worthless dying junk.

What If?
You never had experienced love in your life
Or hatred, Compassion
**********************
No matter what you are, whether you are Controlled inside and outside
                              A vessel for future kinds
                        Or
                              Lacking common emotions and feelings
Never let me people remove who you are
                       never let them change you
                or manipulate you into there own image
                                   family
     friends
               enemies
stick to your own path
                      its your life, your soul, you take it by the neck and use it
                          or throw it down the drain...

© 2009 Rayin


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Wow, this is really good. Interesting enough too stay focused. Great write =)

Posted 15 Years Ago


that was very interesting to read...nice work =]

Posted 15 Years Ago


jesus h christ (sorry if you're religious) but i think i just fell in love

Posted 15 Years Ago


I really enjoy this, but the format kind of bugged me. It just seemed quite randomly thrown together, despite the fact that you are quite strong in your ideas and imagination. I also thought it would've been better to stick to just one "what if" and plunge deeper into that. Also, you could've maybe formed the first few words a bit better,"What If?
God and the World
Bible
Are just a set up for one ginormous Sketch"
to something like this, "God? He's got the pen, poised above the page. We are the bible, set up as a universal sketch..." Great job! Good luck too on this,
Melinda

Posted 15 Years Ago


K, this is seriously AWESOME! you have a real talent!

Posted 15 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Rayin
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