Belong

 Belonging
  To Belong,
        Just a feeling really...
                        and these feelings are treachorus,
    like your eyes they betray you at every turn...
                  every possible moment
                 Like Time
                   God
                 Christianity
          and nearly all other religion
          disbelief hangs thick through them all
               they come and go with age and corruption
                        
   Much like our blood
                deception runs thick in our veins
     in every creak of our body
      prejudice in our minds
      and discrimination in our words that pound like fists and leave a mark so horrible
that can scar for life.

   Yes to belong, we will do anything
   reach any height
   hurt any of the innocent
   even offend other friends
   Belong is so important that they cast stereotypes 
   So they feel closer to others and away from others

Remove the belonging, and then
you can find
your true
self

Reviews

[Emily?]

This is a beautiful poem. Really inspiring to most people. I showed it too some of my friends and they really enjoyed it! Great write!=)

[Kayla_May]

awesome sauce! pure greatness

[Brittney]

Again... another amazing poem. It was so beautiful it made me really think! :)

[Vertigo]

hmm...reading your writing is like following an intricate train of thought I really liked reading this...

[..R.I.P..]

Wow...this is amazing! It makes you really think about yourself and how you live your life. Great job.

[Mistaken]

Wow... this is...wow amazing lol :) It leaves you thinking of how you live your own life and the roll of others in yours

[shanise]

A thought invoking poem, but a very enjoyable read..

[Rainey]

This poem is extremely powerful. The words you use are so strong and all at once, this poem is also quite beautiful. Great work at this one :)