Incapable of Love

"Dreaming made her want things she could never have"

Tell me why

Do I find it

Necessary

To desire

The very things

I cannot

Have?

 

The honey

From your

Lips

To quench

My sweet

Cravings

 

The softness

From your

Fingers

To revive

My withered

Skin

 

The love

From your

Heart

To lift

My darkened

Spirit

 

I ask you once again

Is it because I’m

Broken?

                   ~R.S

Author's Note

I wrote this not too long ago. Any thoughts would be wonderful(:

Reviews

[TheSweet]

I really liked the ending stanza, it gave meaning to the rest of the poem a lot. I'd say I don't think you need to break up the lines to short unless there is real meaning in it - which for this I can't figure out. But that's an either/or thing, not a necessary change.

Thanks for sharing :)