You sicken me.

Nasty words can provide a beautiful message.

This ugly, vile, putrid, disgusting, rancid, rotting, decaying, innocence that you once thought of as truth

is nothing more than a naive attempt at being human.

You sicken me beyond any prior or future illness. Your existence, it breeds contempt and hypocrisy.

Like youth seeking wisdom or insecurities seeking trust, you are a fool.

This ugly, vile, putrid, disgusting, rancid, rotting, decaying, innocence that you once thought of as love

is nothing more than a naive attempt at being human.

You disturb me beyond any prior or future nightmare. Your existence, it breeds distain and dread.

Like a scorpion riding a frog or kissing poisoned lips, you doom us both, for you are a fool.

This ugly, vile, putrid, disgusting, rancid, rotting, decaying, innocence that you once thought of as yourself

is nothing more than naive attempt at being human.

You sicken your own reflection beyond ever wanting to see your face again. Your existence shatters the glass,

along with your hopes, aspirations, and dreams.

You foolishly assumed that assuming would do no harm, yet here we stand, better said here you fall.

With hands out stretched you reach unearnestly for mine, but you shall receive no such kindness.

For in your eyes I see the despair that have been in mine for far too long.

So now fall, fall slow, deliberate, painfully awaiting the sickening thud.

No one will catch you, and no one will clean up the mess.

Reviews

[Liz]

Oh wow. The descriptiveness of this is amazing. I could strongly feel your anger being portrayed through your words. I like how you use a slight touch of repetitiveness in here. The last two lines are just brilliant;
"So now fall, fall slow, deliberate, painfully awaiting the sickening thud.
No one will catch you, and no one will clean up the mess."
Great write!

[Rdotinc.]

Brilliant

[The Cute 1]

this is good

[ScaryTrees]

I like the way you used the repetition, as the previous reviewer state
It is very effective here, and well done
The anger here is palpable yet controlled and focused
Nice write