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Reviews

[George Love]

Interesting fantasy. I did not know where this was going with the stealthy tailing, secret meetings and all that, but it was indeed an intrguing write. Definitely pulled me into the story and kept me there except for a couple of paragraphs. I think it was the length of the work and scrolling on a screen is not the best way to read something of this length. Nicely done with believable characters and vivid descriptions. Excellent!

[Dezaraye]

Your writing pulls the reader into the story. It's very vivid. Where'd you come up with the names? It's really interesting. The only thing I'd suggest is to maybe break it up into parts only because it's hard to read something long on a computer screen. I like it very much, though.