Koi
A Poem by
Robin
transcendence
She followed the Sun and let her thoughts pour into the night as She slowly closed her eyes and opened her heart to the wandering to find a place silent and still led by lucid grace to the water's edge where She knelt by a pool as black as any lonely night as deep as any lonely thought and She raised her face to the sky to scry the flickers of wish-filled stars their song echoing in every heart beat and in her gentle hands a moonstone glowed polished by time and the tumble of the sea connecting the chiromantic lines of heart and fate and a dream She smiled as she slipped the jewel quietly into the water ripples sparkling before the rising moon and in her reflection watching below the dancing surface a shimmering Koi to which She offered her palm the touch of a friend the acceptance of a beginning with a humble gesture feeling the magic of transcendence the peace of love Copyright 2012 Robin Christopher Amaral
© 2012 Robin
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'and in her gentle hands
a moonstone glowed
polished by time and the tumble of the sea'
i found this very picturesque, light in texture, poetic. It took me back to when the kids used to stroke the Koi at the zoo- it used to be the highlight of the trip they just loved them! fantastic.
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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ahhh, love and transcendence !!
there's magic in this world,
beneath the sun and moon
Posted 12 Years Ago
ahhh, love and transcendence !!
there's magic in this world,
beneath the sun and moon
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
i like your dreams :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
i like your dreams :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
'and in her gentle hands
a moonstone glowed
polished by time and the tumble of the sea'
i found this very picturesque, light in texture, poetic. It took me back to when the kids used to stroke the Koi at the zoo- it used to be the highlight of the trip they just loved them! fantastic.
Posted 12 Years Ago
'and in her gentle hands
a moonstone glowed
polished by time and the tumble of the sea'
i found this very picturesque, light in texture, poetic. It took me back to when the kids used to stroke the Koi at the zoo- it used to be the highlight of the trip they just loved them! fantastic.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Transcendence... My feeling exactly.
Those magical moments of awareness while interacting with our world...
Posted 12 Years Ago
Transcendence... My feeling exactly.
Those magical moments of awareness while interacting with our world...
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
The night...the reflection behind a pool of water. All of it paints a very peaceful and tranquil image. I think that's when we find ourselves best...the night holds just the right amount of solitude.
Posted 12 Years Ago
The night...the reflection behind a pool of water. All of it paints a very peaceful and tranquil image. I think that's when we find ourselves best...the night holds just the right amount of solitude.
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
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Robin CA
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I am a man , I breathe nature , I listen to the stars , I speak dream , music is my life blood , my words pour from my heart . I observe , my hands express .
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