Koi

Koi

A Poem by Robin
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transcendence

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She followed the Sun 

and let her thoughts

pour into the night

as She slowly closed her eyes 

and opened her heart 

to the wandering 


        to find a place 


silent and still 

led by lucid grace 

to the water's edge 

where She knelt by a pool   

        as black as any lonely night  

          as deep as any lonely thought 



and She raised her face to the sky  

to scry the flickers of wish-filled stars  

their song echoing in every heart beat  

and in her gentle hands 

a moonstone glowed

polished by time and the tumble of the sea 

connecting the chiromantic lines 

of heart 

     and fate 

         and a dream 


She smiled as she slipped the jewel 

quietly into the water 

ripples sparkling before the rising moon  

and in her reflection  

watching  below the dancing surface 
 
a shimmering  Koi  

to which She offered her palm 

the touch of a friend  

the acceptance 

of a beginning  

with a humble gesture  

feeling the magic  

of transcendence 

the peace

            of love 






Copyright 2012 Robin Christopher Amaral  

© 2012 Robin


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'and in her gentle hands

a moonstone glowed

polished by time and the tumble of the sea'

i found this very picturesque, light in texture, poetic. It took me back to when the kids used to stroke the Koi at the zoo- it used to be the highlight of the trip they just loved them! fantastic.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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ahhh, love and transcendence !!
there's magic in this world,
beneath the sun and moon

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

i like your dreams :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

'and in her gentle hands

a moonstone glowed

polished by time and the tumble of the sea'

i found this very picturesque, light in texture, poetic. It took me back to when the kids used to stroke the Koi at the zoo- it used to be the highlight of the trip they just loved them! fantastic.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Transcendence... My feeling exactly.
Those magical moments of awareness while interacting with our world...

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

The night...the reflection behind a pool of water. All of it paints a very peaceful and tranquil image. I think that's when we find ourselves best...the night holds just the right amount of solitude.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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