Rush

Rush

A Poem by Robin
"

Prelude to now

"
connect the moments 


spirographical bio-arrhythmia 


spectral contrast , of what is and what is not 


brush stroke perspective 


it moves - always 


spinning 


these silky threads - 


viscous , sticky 


a chase to instinct 


formulated 


genetic  


ethereality and wonder ... 



                                   ( you are here )





copyright 2012 Robin Amaral 

© 2012 Robin


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well said, to the tune of someone who knows how to connect from an open head, thought stream of conscience cooling these hot braided shades moving, words along alive by feeling which fray the flesh and commends the spirit, a created being coming back from writing dreams in such fine work as this ...amazing stuff

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I'm beyond one with my shoe size on this one.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Some dayz seem to much like this not today

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

spirographical bio-arrhythmia - who thinks of that?!!! Only you, birdie. Only you.
And if you hadn't used the words "sticky" and "viscous" the thought never would've came to mind while reading this. You write along the tip of the wind... just as you always have. Words constantly breathing... in search of a open mind to fill.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

'( you are here )'

exactly where i was at that point in time. a lovely originality to this, i love that light touch...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

These silky threads connect us to the etheral world of wonders...Your mind is Fascinating my friend.... This is Magnificient! Thank you..yes, I am here. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your soulmate is always within your own. As the richness is in your mind, of the one who you muses... all fits like the searched puzzle pieces.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

here and everywhere :) love the idea of "silky threads" in the context

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes!!I AM HERE.....Gorgeous words that flow inside.....lovely....hope many have arrived!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This piece has wonderful movement.
BTW, I still don't know where i am.
A pleasure, as ever.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

yes, thank you, i'm here, you be here too

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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