Rush

Prelude to now

connect the moments 

spirographical bio-arrhythmia 

spectral contrast , of what is and what is not 

brush stroke perspective 

it moves - always 

spinning 

these silky threads - 

viscous , sticky 

a chase to instinct 

formulated 

genetic  

ethereality and wonder ... 

                                   ( you are here )

copyright 2012 Robin Amaral 

Reviews

[writing mojo]

well said, to the tune of someone who knows how to connect from an open head, thought stream of conscience cooling these hot braided shades moving, words along alive by feeling which fray the flesh and commends the spirit, a created being coming back from writing dreams in such fine work as this ...amazing stuff

[Poetic Justice]

how eloquently sung..I am here. Indeed.

[Jaweena...Eileen Quinta..]

Sounds very much like my life...I am there! Beautifully thought out and written!

[FireWoman]

The heartbeat of life, Mother Earth speaking with your voice.

[Michael of Gilead]

Damn fine.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

the primal and the celestial in the sweetest myelin sheath~coated with universal sugar for the soul~

[S. Michael Long]

spiders and deep thoughts (: good write -s

[Wondering Mind]

Yet it was more wonder than instinct that brought me "here".

[Jvonne]

You have the mind of a true artist Robin, its hard to express my views on this one as it is so masterfully written I feel a bit intimidated by your talent.
Wonderful write Robin.

[arbitrary jane]

the moments... each with its own texture, life, sound, viscosity...
where we are is ever evolving and being evolved-upon.
I think i'll write that lat parenthetical reminder on the wall in spray paint, 3 feet high.

ps. 'bio-arrhythmia' holds its own motion. beautiful.