Prime

lucidity

 

The dream is Primal 

 

our nature 

 

our beginnings

 

the bounce of chance

 

through the tesseract pachinko machinations of imagination

 

geologic fractals reflected

 

within the gazing ball of the infinite chromatic

 

the spectrum of wonder

 

in the pause of a prismatic ... dewdrop

 

a moment 

 

all held in the magic 

 

of the seed and the egg 

 

of creation ~

 

 

 

 

 

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Reviews

[asdarkeyesclose]

'within the gazing ball of the infinite chromatic'

a great image in a poem that uncovers the inexplicable core of humanity, as fundamental as breathing. i was reading today about the red deer cave people and your poem left me thinking about them again, that sense of primal, the instinctive, almost forgotten ancestral core of man. fantastic writing.

[ErosNthanatos]

Creation Theory

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i think this is extremely well crafted.
around the middle of this piece (from line 5) the syllable count of each word lends generously to the fascets being evoked by the theme, and then the last lines (5 lines) smooth out again,..as in the beginning of the piece.
you've employed a very intelligent strategy here that makes it impossible for the reader to not feel this poem - to go through it like it were a phenomon to experience...

Great job!

[sienikeha]

wonderful. the dream is def primal!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

i loved this poem- your wording is beautiful, and this poem is also very deep- it briefly explains the wonders and erupting possibilites coming from us prime creatures, all of whom came from very small and simple beginnings...

[Michael of Gilead]

What a twisted path it is...

[Ariel B.]

Aww man, I love 'through the tesseract pachinko machinations of imagination' - that's so vivid and so abstracted all at once. And seriously nice timing on 'the spectrum of wonder/ in the pause of a prismatic .... dewdrop/ a moment.'

[Arabdha]

pristine beauty ! lovely..

[Rossen]

Amazing! your perfect drop . this perfect world!
what do you think got into ours?

[Amber Betty Marie Child..]

Hmm. Takin us back to something but where? We know but we dont.

They say that when were born our whole brain is active however it becomes "nonaccessable" later. It is still a part of us and i think that in your work you like ti hit truly accessable parts we often leave aside.

Hope that was satisfying.
Getting my s**t together is a little hectic :(

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

a moment all held in the magic of your poetic hands........such a lovely write Robin as always.