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Reviews

[asdarkeyesclose]

i loved the way everything tied together in this wings/moon/dreams until the dreams stretching out were wings. you paint a glorious picture of the night and i do so like the so subtle handwritten text- the poetry seems more immediate and personal because of it. Stunning!

[just rose.]

it's the structure of this that's so effective. there is so much air built into the piece that it creates piece.

I do like the use of the word Sumerian and have never seen it in a poem that I can recall - at least not one of this brevity and depth.

[Crow]

I luv the words, the script, and the compilation that forms the imagery or the spirit of this composition. Wonderful piece!

[Jessi Leigh]

Gorgeous!

[zig]

that again for doing that robin.

well its beautifully worded, and i know that aspiring desire well. i'm curious about "sumerian moon", what that means or symbolizes to you... its an interesting detail. again, enjoyed this very much.

[InkSlinger]

So much, with so little.. in keeping with this form... breathtaking!!

[lenake]

I think the short sentences were pretty cool, and the "handwriting" - I probably wouldn't have been as interested without it. I also like how you stretched out the idea until it was rather vague. That way people could make what they like out of it. Amazing job!

[mattmatt5161]

lovely poem

[Sarah]

this is a lovely poem, i like the way every thing is about dreames

[Michael of Gilead]

Nanna does speak to me as your poem speaks volumes.

[roarke]

yeahyeah, beautiful to be sure, but let's all not forget what happened to Icarus.... Sumeria not withstanding.... font style is a bit hard to read here, besides, it doesn't have the smudges of hand-working and tear drop stains framing it.... just saying, sensei.....