Allegro
A Poem by
Robin
en espanol ~
Vida allegro
el camino surreal
mi corazón es tuya
en la playa del amor
venga aqui chica
Bailamos !
© 2011 Robin
Author's Note
one minute challenge - using the word Allegro - no more than eight lines
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You had to go one better didn't you? And hit us with the entire thing in Spanish...This is Boss!
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
LEKKA I like the spanish touch, makes it romantic, but not cliche as another language would..
So here's mine
Cat screech
black and white keys provide escape
allegro in (C)alamity of Minor error she plays
even in panic, masterpieces are created
Posted 13 Years Ago
LEKKA I like the spanish touch, makes it romantic, but not cliche as another language would..
So here's mine
Cat screech
black and white keys provide escape
allegro in (C)alamity of Minor error she plays
even in panic, masterpieces are created
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
!! AH !! this is hoppin'!
totally a different take on the allegro (and bringing in the alegre tambien)
'el camino surreal' esta sumamente e imposiblemente facil... porque no habia yo pensado en eso!!??
me encanta.
Posted 13 Years Ago
!! AH !! this is hoppin'!
totally a different take on the allegro (and bringing in the alegre tambien)
'el camino surreal' esta sumamente e imposiblemente facil... porque no habia yo pensado en eso!!??
me encanta.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
muy bien senor :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
muy bien senor :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I don't know spanish very well.......but just trying to say it and imagine it all at once....it's still beautiful. Maybe add a note to readers, puting it into English? xo
Posted 13 Years Ago
I don't know spanish very well.......but just trying to say it and imagine it all at once....it's still beautiful. Maybe add a note to readers, puting it into English? xo
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
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