Scratch

more metaphoria

 

of metaphoria and linguistic stretching 

 

chocolate bagels and funny jewelry

 

of acerbic wit and smiling moonfaces

 

of gypsum and required rollcalls

 

 

of flashback summers and long dryspells

 

Prolific and wanting more

 

wings and passing ships

 

of french philosophers and daydreams

 

 

missing stars and broken cameras

 

silk moths and one brief dawn

 

congratulations to the brave

 

Vive le poète

 

 

Reviews

[Circe]

this made me smile big time! I think it is very much the essence of you.... the spontaneity and love for different things... both beautiful and wondrous... feels like I am floating on a cloud in your imagery.... wispy tendrils of idealism.... the dreamer dreams on!

[zig]

this sounds like someone i know... in fact i think it is about her, yet, still kind of "scratching" the suface. well done my friend

"I like the "of" structural device a lot. It allows for all the eclectic imagery to be interconnected seamlessly."

i have to agree with that... it really keeps the motion going, no sudden stops.

zig

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

the fabrics of diverse expression sewn in perfect connectivity~ surreal balanced with real~ what a reeling dreamy sequence!~

[just rose.]

I like the "of" structural device a lot. It allows for all the eclectic imagery to be interconnected seamlessly.

[Phibby Venable]

and congrats on an excellent piece of work! i love this.

missing stars and broken cameras



silk moths and one brief dawn
Yes...

[arbitrary jane]

huge grin. ... you do this so well. and every conversation with you is a poem.

[Emily B]

viva la poesia

[roarke]

ah, gimme one of those chocolate bagel things.... on second thought, better make that a fried danish.....

liberte amore!!!!

cough, got that danish stuck in my throat.....

[OT]

"Vive le poète" indeed! an abstract concoction here! nice!

[asdarkeyesclose]

'of flashback summers and long dryspells'

the poetry flowing effortlessly along, some very strong images here, loved that second stanza in particular. Stunning!