Scratch

more metaphoria

 

of metaphoria and linguistic stretching 

 

chocolate bagels and funny jewelry

 

of acerbic wit and smiling moonfaces

 

of gypsum and required rollcalls

 

 

of flashback summers and long dryspells

 

Prolific and wanting more

 

wings and passing ships

 

of french philosophers and daydreams

 

 

missing stars and broken cameras

 

silk moths and one brief dawn

 

congratulations to the brave

 

Vive le poète

 

 

Reviews

[Circe]

this made me smile big time! I think it is very much the essence of you.... the spontaneity and love for different things... both beautiful and wondrous... feels like I am floating on a cloud in your imagery.... wispy tendrils of idealism.... the dreamer dreams on!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the essence of the poet is described here. we are all this...and we are still searching...and will always be still searching.

[MOON]

Great imagery and flow ,long live the poet and poetry.

[Samuel Dickens]

I don't think you could possibly stop a poet's linguistic stretching. Shut him up in a dark room, and he'd still sail the high seas.

[Kenneth The Poet]

This is classic Robin.

[Tony]

The parallels here draw from the light of "smiling moonfaces":)

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

This is quite artistic, I found the stream of consciousness and spontaneity principle really off the charts in this one!

[-----]

Very descriptive and do I dare say, flighty? I felt as if I was propelled to each topic quickly and with a sense of urgency. An unusual style, but captivating.

[patricia]

this had the feel of a butterfly flitting from flower to flower, so many images, it seemed light, cheerful and appreciative. A very positive heart warming write. Thankyou.

[Rikkevi Rue]

that the mind processes information we know, but the absorption of ones surrounds and the conversion of impressions into thoughts and emotions is a phenomenon usually overlooked. The artist (written in this case) stops the film and examines each frame, dissecting it and extracting life's plasma for his analysis and interest, incubates it and supplies a rhetorical petri dish rife with his own personally aestheticized "bacteria" designed to malinger for as many generations as possible. Your laboratory's culture is prolific Dr.!