Metaphoria

l'imagination

 

mindrack twisty cell game

 

point to point needlesque ah ha's

 

squeezy fit to fit tricky winks

 

slinky glance eye touche giggle

 

daydreamer parfum cirrus-curiousity

 

scented love-a-delic scandalicious

 

puckersweet lemoncake whisper bites

 

skin glaze watsu dreamswimming

 

pick-a-petal wishblooms - pink

 

flipflop shiatsu macadamia

 

crunchy pop pop happysnaps

 

smilebig fingerverbs oilgliding 

 

yumfun palmglide starsparkle

 

mmmmmmmmm ...

 

your purring 
   
 

 

 

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Reviews

[arbitrary jane]

isn't it grand when there aren't enough words in the english language to capture a moment? when we need to break all the molds and forge our own speak...
also... i couldn't explain why, but finding 'macadamia' in here was like fishing through a chest of gold doubloons and coming across the hope diamond.

[Phibby Venable]

flipflop shiatsu macadamia



crunchy pop pop happysnaps




smilebig fingerverbs oilgliding




yumfun palmglide starsparkle



mmmmmmmmm ...


I love this. It is bursting with Life.

[asdarkeyesclose]

'puckersweet lemoncake', scrumptious! is there anything you can't do with language! Stunning!

[zig]

man, great sounds, and great mood! has a very sexual feel to it. to get the feeling right, we sometimes have to go beyond words and meanings, and you did a great job of that. i have only one critizism, it feels a bit choppy, the individual line don't seem very well connected to each other, they don't seem to flow into each other the way you think they would, perhaps just a few connecting words, like: of and the this to, etc,might bring the whole thing togather more... just a thought. otherwise, really enjoyed this, great work

[Michael of Gilead]

Fanflastical, an algorithm of verbal un-verbosity

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

a candy shop of delectable words!~ shaping language from the side~ love it! snaps so lilting off the tonue!~ yum~

[Brad]

i loved this thing throughout, your words a "flusterfacation" of "exasperated" twists. your voice simular to a certain poetess we all know, bravoooo

[Ed Hart]

happysnaps is right!

[Lilly Negoi]

"flipflop shiatsu macadamia " :) love that. actually i love the entire poem :)). and i still think you should write a dictionary of wordlings ;)

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Scandalicious? Well, by God it's in my vocabulary now!
Fun reading this, smiling as I make ready for dreamtime.