Flux

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Reviews

[Ariel B.]

Ah, I love the way you've written
"I'm free!
and not" -
the structure, the way that "free!" is an exclamation and "not" is an afterthought - it's such a good visual illustration of these constrasts of emotion.

It's a funny feeling reading this, because I just moments ago posted a new poem about feeling alone in more pleasurable ways, and this is such a bitter counterpoint to mine. I hope you can fall in love with your loneliness and help it metamorphose into the serenity of solitude.

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Astonishing depth of emotion.
Masterpiece, my friend.

[Desert Dreamer]

This one leaves me without words, as if I am lost in that place between the lines, in between life and all the other words, in that nameless place that I see but cannnot name between your words...

[Brad]

man, this one hurts, like the raw writing style, robin, and yeah, sometimes freedom is lonely

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there's a dichotomy!.. but with a haunting melody..lovely

[An Ordinary Woman]

"I'm free- and not..." says so much.
Those four words can stand alone and be very powerful all by themselves but put with the rest- amazing!

[Ed Hart]

many steeped in the dramas of life would give appendages to have arrived at 'free', and be in flux...

[Lilly Negoi]

the ebb tide of life is never easy to handle - the only point is to not feel lonely when alone...