tearing 3 am out of my morning mourning rising dawn forsake dreams to wake the dead cursing night players screaming mythos from my head and I wondered if that clock cared 3 clangs rang… and bang a pillow full of grit roman numerals underhand three i's - capitalized her story in Greek
just wanted to sleep you know as well as I ...sleep is for the dead The sand man commeth but not for my sad head leaves me lost clock staring mad and that damned cat too chicken to fight
All I's got ta say is... you rock! You've turned me on to Kerouac and made a wonderful dance partner! You started the crazeetrain with the first two lines and working with you was near effortless!
Any time you want to leak your muse on me...feel free!
Yes, I did enjoy this work, so much so I thought I felt the breeze as a red stiletto heal flew past my head. Did you ever get the cat? Very wonderfull imaginative read.
haha how did I miss this!? two of my favourite writers - this break is most inconvenient! i love the surreality in this one - it's all whimsical and slightly mad at parts which i just adore haha there are hints of both of you - but overall - who can tell - it all blends and moves together - i love the "my window is open to suggestion - a brick" ha! nice - well done you two!!
Oh, this is awesome collaboration. You two complement each other fantastically. This has a beat and tempo feel to it. I was tapping my feet in rhythm. Wonderful, wonderful job.
This is like a cocktail mixed by four hands holding, a dash of this and that, stirred and definitely shaken by those early morning sounds. Love the winding down .. but not choosing fave lines, that would be so unfair! :)
This is really good! I generally don't like broken line poems, like this, but for some reason this flows very well, and I like the transition from animal to woman (but not completely). Great job, both of you :)
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