Restless

a tale of two muses

 

Watching from afar. Shadows bow down before the soft hues of lunar grace. Understanding forms the elegant smile upon his face. Tender care wraps around each step - walking on precious glass. The edge between the worlds a well worn mountain trail, leading closer and further. All at once and never before.

Her morning wears the scent of secrets. Nearby a golden chalice rests upon a wilted rose , the last drops of the potent elixir evaporating into the morning mist.  Her eyes slivered by sunlight ,  she seals them to time and embraces the last whisper of her silken dream. She feels the warmth of the sun pour over her skin, and a shadow of a smile she knows she will soon miss ...

Shimmer and shivers echo around about. Smallest motion drawing the long awaited sigh as movement sinks down into the flow of the threads. He knows this be the calming breath before the heartfelt torn asunder cascades into trickles thundering onto bare bones. The beginning as never before .

Author's Note

A bit of spontaenous combustion between the two muses of Fyreheart and I .

Shen , it was inspirational experience to write along side you .

Reviews

[Marie Shine]

I like this enchantingly inked write very much. I love the vivid visual detail painted through excellent word choice, for the reader. So eloquently expressed, the poem flows effortlessly from your skilled pen. Lovely use of metaphor and alliteration. I have so enjoyed reading. An excellent collaboration. Thank you for sharing. Blessings......

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Music of two muses...:) a well-crafted work

[A.A.Romanczuk]

A golden chalice...hmm...religious reference there or just artistically fitting...a song of lungs and heart...and admiration

[Celeste21]

I love the line about morning wearing the scent of her secrets. A sensual aesthetic quality.

[Ladysue]

love the title and this collaboration was beautifully done...

[Amber Betty Marie Child..]

Incredibly wavey, I am taken away...................

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

seamless saturating beautiful drawing in words~

[Lilly Negoi]

mm, good combination, you two :).
lots of "s" and "sh" and this somehow suggests the "long awaited sigh as movement sinks down into the flow of the threads". very nicely done!

[Tommy]

Two of my favorite writers blending smoothly and flawlessly…What a sensuous feel!

Great Write You Two!
RLG,
Tommy