Liquidity

Liquidity

A Chapter by Robin
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california koans

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the sun rose

 

and caught its fall

 

a dewdrop slipping

 

into the glossy stream

 

its soft note unheard

 

its ripple soon erased

 

the grace of nature

 

liquid ~

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



© 2011 Robin


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"The sun rose/ and caught it's fall"-- strong contrasting images between "rose" and "fall". Dawn-- a moment of clarity or an enlightened moment. What speaks the loudest in the koan is that the "soft note" is "unheard" and the lasting ripples of the koan are that "the ripple" is "soon erased". The "grace of nature"-- what smoothes everything over in nature or makes it always work out is that it's "liquid". I also enjoyed the cylcic quality as well-- a very fluid poem. Liquidity indeed.

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Precious poem.

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I can see every moment. Peaceful, comforting.

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wow I love how you described liquid. Totally Special and inviting. Nice job on this.
I wish you the best on your future writing. :)

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Savoring this picture....in its perfection. It is to me a scene of complete peace.

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Gorgeous mind painting =)

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the eternity of a falling drop...perfection...

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A plop that sends ripples somewhere and is critical to the whole. Very lovely.

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Innocence lost, it kind of seems like something so pure getting lost in the flow. I love the image this graces my mind with...

Pure Beauty!
RLG,
Tommy


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To capture a single moment in time and frame the elegance of such beauty given from nature. To be enjoyed when desired.

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food for the ethereal soul~ a trellis of beauty built from a beautiful mind~

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